Though the synths were a bit too Hi-Fi and the percussion was a little too complex to be considered true 8-bit. You've really got some talent dude, much respect!
If there was one thing i would suggest, it would be this; the melody sounded a bit bare. I'd recommend adding a pad and/or strings to fill out the sound.
Excellent work guy, Keep it Up! -Peace
Yeah, the synths sound a bit to modern, but that's mainly because of the reverb effect, but they are all pure NES simulated sounds I assure you, and I only used 3 patterns at a time. I totally agree with you that the break-beat parts are the ones that are making it too complex for a simple 8-Bit track, but you must agree, it's still 8-Bit music at heart :) As for the strings and a more complex melody.., hmm...its not that I didn't try already, but I guess I rushed it a bit, I can do better, that's for sure, perhaps I'll give it a shot someday ;) Anyway, thanks for the score and for a short, but insightful review, I listened to some of your tracks, and I mostly like them, if I find the time, I'll write a review or 2. -Cheers
I could really sink my teeth into this track; all together its sounded great. The sections were well thought out and i could really dig the chordprogression, especially the key change about three minutes in!
I really only had to suggestions;
1.) The drums sounded a tad week. I'd recommend bringing up the bass frequencies for the clap and adding some 'oompf' to the kick. (slight distortion could help you with that)
2.) Around 2:22, just after the breakdown, I'd recommend crescendoing a bit more; building the sound before you go back to the chorus. It didn't necessarily sound abrupt; maybe adding a gated/ retriggered snare in would do the job.
All in all, a great track; I really appreciated this. Keep it up dude! -Peace
Thank you so much for your feedback. I'll get to working on that and I should have an updated track within the next day or two. I'm glad you like my song :)
I personally would have brought out the percussion a bit more.. but that's just me. Also, i know alot of people get this but it is just a tad repetitive... But you've got style. Keep it up dude!
Thanx a lot for the advice. I like you, dude. You've got good tips for me. LOL
This is an absolutely amazing peice... but i'm sorry, it looks like the music gods ejaculated on her
YES!! cuz shes hawt?
I absolutely adore your work and your style, but your anatomy could use a bit of work. the bone structure and proportions were a bit off.. just keep that in mind next time; I look forward to seeing what you've got coming^-^
Gah my porportions are always way off XD" Thanks for the comment thou :3
I'd say that after a long and cruel argument, her boyfriend tried to feed her to a wood-chipper; and nearly succeeded! He returned to their rotting farmhouse (somewhere in the Carolinas) grinning and wiping his bloodstained hands on the seat of his pants. That night, as he enjoyed a bottle of whiskey and a rerun of Gilligan's Isle, He was startled by a knock at the door. He expected to see a pair of Jehovah's Witnesses or some shmuck selling magazines; however he was not prepared to see his now-ex girlfriend, freshly scalped and brandishing her favorite ax... Lets just say what ensued was similar to watching a meth-head perform a lobotomy. Great drawing dude, keep up the good work! -peace
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